dont juice on me

somone in my script writing class, told me my short film was too crude and that no one would want to watch it, and then went on to say "i think high school kids would even be offended by this." I wanted to tell him to fuck off so badly, and that his film was the most pointless fucking trash so far.....even though i kind of liked his. I mean...i remember high school. Everyone had weird sexual tension....weird for various reasons. especially those first couple of years. i dont know... I didn't say anything though...so i guess it doesn't matter. But still...its not like i had anyone kill their father and then anally rape him. I have a kid who can control time, saying impolite things to a girl that he is attracted to....because he says what he feels, and he doesn't know how to talk to girls, but with time control, he can be smooth....
i just thought this guy was a little niave. He probably buys into the austin philosophy, of making a conscious effort to be un-entertaining, and replacing it with played out types of hippie shit. blah...im bitter.
On the other hand...a girl in the class said it was "fun" and "crude can be good." My teacher/ta would not say anything about it.....everyone in the class was laughing at pretty much every part that was supposed to be funny......even that guy, so whatever.

i have something to say that matters....i hope.